This looks amazing anyway. The attention to detail is marvelous and your lighting and shading really show off.
poza tym zajebisty Art ;3
Yeah... to say it needs work is putting it nicely.
It has that all-too-common sense that everything happens for no other reason than it HAS TO to get the characters where they have to be for whatever the author wants to do to them. It doesn't feel natural. There's no proper tone or context, and without that I can't buy into the world.
*the barriers between the worlds quiver at his rage* Unforgivable...
Awesome work !
And why do these soldiers' uniforms and equipment look like they were from WWII (on earth)?
(too lazy to and not really interested in reading the fanfiction)
I'm not sure what is going on here but this bull really should stop taking more steroids.