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Derpy's and Carrot Top's journey by Ziom05 Derpy's and Carrot Top's journey by Ziom05
Watch out undead ponies, nightmares and curses. Beware of Carrot Top and DERPY!

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While there is a fantastic amount of work placed into this piece; I have this odd sensation that there are things that are... off. But not extremely! Just a few little nit picky bits. The soldier's look like their faces got smushed by an over zealous Pinkie. I can see that you wanted them to look like the skeletons of earth ponies though. That is a great idea however, just a smidgen more to the definition there would be awesome. The lighting is ok, it's almost not bright enough but also not dark enough in places. I know, odd, but it feels iffy there...

/Otherwise/ it's a great piece of work, and I love the little details you added! The tail bones are awesome on their own. The ominous glowing red eyes depict the evils of undead skeletal earth ponies as they rise to defend whatsit in the ruins. I adore the excitement on Ditzy's face as she points to an interesting piece while Carrot Top seems to notice the dangerous presence of inexplicable evils.

This is honestly, very original. The gray-scale in the background makes the place feel old while the ponies in the fore-ground are youthful in their bright colors. The rays of sunlight show their path despite the dangers, and ahead; there must be a fountain that shines despite it's age and is covered in flora'd growth. More or less; a fountain of youth.

Finally, I want to say that no piece is perfect, and critiquing helps you get infinitely better. Talent is found in many places and my dear; it pours from your hands. Some molding will make for creations that truly make for more than a thousand words.
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Critique by Chill-Krill Aug 5, 2012, 12:46:00 PM
So... amazing work! First, I will tell you my personal opinion, that won't affect the final rating. Her name is Ditzy, and not Derpy, considering that that name is offending.
Now back to our business. An amazing piece of art. Though the style ain't something very special, it's very original. I love the shadows, the effects, everything! Though it doesn't have a big impact, I mean, it doesn't draw attention, it's very original, and i my opinion, the artist had a very impressive vision. One or two zombies seem to be forced inside this drawing. Forced as in they don't really belong there, but they make a great addition.
Great work!
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CaleoIsAwesome Featured By Owner Sep 5, 2014  Student General Artist
So, I see this, and I'm just like, "I have found mah brainzzzzzzz!!!" 'Cause I would be doing exactly what Derpy is doing.
ColonelBSacquet Featured By Owner May 2, 2014
Gotta love Derpy's goofy face. :-)

But ...

Where is this ruined city ? Who are the six visible undead soldier ? What do they want ?
Ink-Shade-1017 Featured By Owner Oct 8, 2013  Student Filmographer
At least there not weeping pegisi!
W17 Featured By Owner Sep 18, 2013
nicely done ^_^
Mister-Scott Featured By Owner Jun 20, 2013
Wow, just... wow. Thanks for taking the time to make such an awesome pic!
mandoron23 Featured By Owner May 24, 2013
"Watch out undead ponies, nightmares and curses. Beware of Carrot Top and DERPY!"

I can read that sentence in a power metal singer's voice because of epicness. I regret nothing.

SERIOUSLY great work here.
Phenometron Featured By Owner May 1, 2013
They make an incredible pair.
ShuyinTheEnigmatic Featured By Owner Apr 16, 2013  Student Writer
Hm, so they've entered the creepy part of town. Looks fun!

Well done! I like how slightly oblivious those two look.
wiinick Featured By Owner Feb 13, 2013
Soooooo fanfic?
wiinick Featured By Owner Feb 13, 2013
Soooo is there a fanfic about this :D
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